Friday, 14 July 2017


We all know that what Macbeth done was horrible but at the end of the day there nothing that be done about it. I know that Macbeth didn't want to kill King Duncan and kill Macduff family but the influence of his wife allowed him to do it. He truly regrets what he has done.

The audience i think feel sorry for Macbeth as his mind is in turmoil and the quote that backs up the point is “Full of scorpion in his mind”  this shows his mind is in turmoil. The word Scorpion shows an effect something that's not positive. It creates a sympathetic moment.

In the play Lady Macbeth questions Macbeth's Manhood and the quote that show this is “ Are you a man” Macbeth didn't want to disagree with her because he knew that he was a man and would take any challenge and the challenge was to kill King Duncan.

After Macbeth had killed King Duncan he felt guilty for what he done  because of his bloody hand. Because he was to afraid to put the dagger back to where the guard were Lady Macbeth had a duty to do so. After Lady Macbeth had came back she washed her bloody hands to show that Macbeth should not have nothing to worry about and that he wash his hand cleanly and freely.

After the death had happened, a few days later Lady Macbeth later kills herself because she was also going mad. Macbeth was upset about the death of Lady macbeth. The quote thats shows this “She should have died hereafter” this shows that Macbeth still has love for her even though she had pushed him to horrible things. He still loved her.

In my opinion, we feel sorry for Macbeth because after he kills Banquo he has a vision of him sitting in his chair and that made him turn crazy.‘Which of you have done this?’
Macbeth thinks that Banquo is alive and every can see him but it’s only Macbeth who is hallucinating about Banquo’s ghost.

We feel sorry for Macbeth because he hallucinates about Duncan.‘Is this a dagger which I see before me?’
Macbeth starts hallucinating after he kills Duncan. He feels guilty about what he done.This is sympathetic because Macbeth didn’t want to kill Duncan but he had to and now his life is a misery.

In conclusion, i think we should overall be sorry for Macbeth and he was forced in doing things he didn't want to do and the people around him also influenced him to do the things he done , such as the witches and Lady Macbeth. He wouldn't have never went crazy if he didn't do it and he will never had have vision.

Thursday, 8 June 2017

Flart Sonnet- Macbeth

Morally bad or wrong; wicked: and evil 
O Moon! old boughs lisp forth a holier din.
I should have fear'd her had she been a devil.
toically lifted her chin.

immoral and wicked.
full of heart."
 heartless thief
pain and the heartbreak he caused me
terror of Wonderland
. I'll burn my whole life down
Filthy Fifty.
Mindless And Heartless
combine brutal screams
undoubtedly up to no good.

Friday, 21 April 2017

In a world ,where everything was upside down. A wicked man called Gabriel Brown was manufacturing what was called THE WORLD'S DANGEROUS WEAPON. Its was all a misunderstanding and nothing could be done. It was all in the power of Gabriel Brown. Gabriel Joseph Brown was a 27 year old scientist from London (England) and had been working on the bomb that would wipe half of the population of the world. He had never been caught and he will never be caught. S.W.O.T after S.W.O.T teams have travelled day and night to find the man that can kill half the human race.

He had been working on his master plan from the age of 9 and now at 27 he has succeeded. However, Gabriel Brown did know when where to use it , he was undecided. He was in what words the president of the world and no one had control over him not even surprisingly our one and only God. He hasn't announced the bomb but people knew that he wasn't a man to be around and he couldn't not be captured. If ever Gabriel Brown knew how he had mistakenly made the World Bomb he would bomb the world including himself. He didn't give a crap.
He was so selfish, despised himself and other people.

From the age of 9 he had loved science and wherever he went he would bring science with him. Because he despised himself and other people , he started from young mixing acid with different acid with special sciencey things. Gabriel Brown could of had died at the age of 14 because of the mixer of powder and acids he had combined. Luckily he was saved by his humble and peaceful mother who did not encourage Gabriel to do so. At the age of 19 he had set up a mini bomb in his mother's room when she was sleeping so she could perish and die.

A man named Kevin Pip said to himself that he was going to be a stop to The world Bomb and to put a stop to Gabriel Brown. He decided to try to make a individual bomb just for Gabriel Brown so that he could die and the world can go back to peaceful world it was before. Kevin pip wasn't a scientist but know that if you add a bit of gunpowder and a bit of acid it badly injure a human or potentially can kill Gabriel Brown. Kevin Pip had all the equipment for the job but Gabriel Brown was very hard to catch. Kevin Pip didn't want to get people involved so he went solo.

Kevin Pip had place various bombs in place where Kevin thought Gabriel will be planning his next attack. 12 out of 15 bombs had failed and luckily no one was injured however , Gabriel Brown was smart he knew someone would attempt to try and kill him. And Gabriel Brown was determined not to make that happen. Kevin Pip was the most determined to make the world a better place. Gabriel Brown was unstoppable.

Until One Day ……..

One of the bombs that Kevin Pip had place was succeeding and Kevin Pip was edging victory. Kevin knew that Gabriel Brown hated the elderly and knew that his next attack was going to be at the elderly home. Minutes later Gabriel approach the Elderly home and as soon as he entered the front door he was perished and was killed the world was safe.

But celebration was cut short.
Gabriel Brown had set both the bombs to perish planet Earth.

Kevin Pip had found a plan the launch both bombs high into the sky but he didn't know how far the bombs would away from earth. Time was running out. 10 mins on the clock. Kevin had no choice but launch both bomb in space save planet earth. And so did. The bombs flew into space and was like a explosion of fireworks. The world was save all the the help of Kevin Pip. Kevin Pip made sure something like this will never happen or did he??

Friday, 31 March 2017

Both poems In Flanders Fields and We Shall Keep the Faith are about the soldiers that went to WW1 and fought in the war. It is also about willingness of going to war and dying and now it's our time to repay by wearing poppies to signify their bravery.
The writers in both poems express the remembrance of the soldiers and showing respect to the soldiers by wearing poppies it can dignify the dead.
This makes the reader think it is essential the community/public know the the soldier basically died for them.

Both poems use symbolism. In Flanders Fields the poet uses ‘……’  to represent…
Similarly in We Shall Keep the Faith the poet uses ‘.......’ to represent....
This makes the reader think war is something to be messing around with and because of war we should show our respect because i think the dead soldier would and will appreciate the fact we care.

Both poems use imagery. In Flanders Field the poet uses ‘We shall not sleep, though poppies grow’ to create a picture of something that is showing what should remember them for what they done.
In Flanders Field the poet uses ‘.......’ to create an image of….
This makes the reader think war is….. because…

Both poems use aural effects. In Flanders Field the poet uses ‘In Flanders fields.’ to create the onomatopoeic effect of flowers being blown by the wind.
Similarly in We Shall Keep the Faith the poet uses ‘.......’ to create the sound of….
This creates the sense that war is…. Because….

Overall, both poems are trying to express the idea that war is a bad idea but there no way to stop it however, Ww1 was meant to be the war to end all wars but that wasn't the case.
In particular, In Flanders Field the poet is trying to say that we should remember the dead.
While in We Shall Keep the Faith the poet is saying that we should forget and to always have faith.

Thursday, 9 March 2017

These Are My Words

Yo, this is my words
I am a boy for Stratford
I use english
Sometimes slang
I maybe use non english way to much
Can i help it

These are my words
I am simple
I can be smart
But not dumb
What can i do

People are different
U dundo
Smart is who i am
Stupid is who i am
And i am not changing for nobody
No matter what

I use these words cuz that's who i am 
Ur not me 
And i am not yu
We all different 
Thats the way its meant to be

Be who you are 
I will be me u get me
Language are things that come out our mouth
They way we speak its cuz of our vioce
Thats the way god created us to be

I am Idris Koroma and
 Theses are my words

Tuesday, 7 February 2017

Flarf poety


"I was sad and subdued"
Darkness, the polar opposite to brightness, is understood to be the condition of a very small amount or even an absence of visible light. Humans are unable to distinguish color in conditions of either high brightness or ...

Wednesday, 25 January 2017

The personality of May is that she is a very small minded people as an example she keeps her circle small. The word alone explain alot that she is doesnt have many friends or doesnt have an friends at all. The wolrd is big but to her it is a stone. I think that May mature but she is still young .

The personality of Molly is that she is imaginary and she lets her imagination runs wild. I dont think she scared of things because she touching or holding a crab which most people wouldnt do.

The personality of Maggie is that she is very open minded and likes to have a discover and imagine things. I think she is so adventurous that we forget was things was in her mind - example- "so sweetly she couldn't  remember her troubles."

The cuplets change my perspective of the poem in a way that is was all fun and everything until the point where it wants you to read more. We wants to find more meaning to it cuplets but it has no further information.